Sunday, November 22, 2009

Rewrite Week Eleven Theme

No place to change diapers except at the kitchen table.
Blocks stacked and knocked over at the kitchen table.
Candy Land won and lost at the kitchen table.
Coloring inside the lines at the kitchen table.
Addition and subtraction conquered at the kitchen table.
Giggling on the phone at the kitchen table.
Crying over puppy love crushed at the kitchen table.
Freshman classes picked at the kitchen table.
First date nervously sits at the kitchen table.
Senior portrait proofs chosen at the kitchen table.
Boxes stacked and ready to be loaded at the kitchen table.
Car pulling out of the driveway as I cry at the kitchen table.

2 comments:

  1. Sure, that works off the model very nicely. How about this way too?


    ...The kitchen table

    No place to change diapers except at...
    Blocks stacked and knocked over at...
    Candy Land won and lost at...
    Coloring inside the lines at...
    Addition and subtraction conquered at...
    Giggling on the phone at...
    Crying over puppy love crushed at...
    Freshman classes picked at...
    First date nervously sits at...
    Senior portrait proofs chosen at...
    Boxes stacked and ready to be loaded at...
    Car pulling out of the driveway as I cry at...the kitchen table

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  2. Yes I do like that better. Thanks for your patience.

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